Poetry is a sky dark with a wild-duck migration. - Carl Sandburg
I like it but I'd like it even more if it still held all the heat of Greece...
You meanNow I keep my gin in the freezernext to a book of poetrythat holds all the heat of Greece?
Maybe 'that still holds all the heat of Greece'...That would do it for me. nice and terse and haikuesque.Just that unexpected juxtaposition somehow with fridge and it still holding the heat -- got to make for some intrigue etc...
Yes I agree.Doesn't always have to be morose eh?Thanks.
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I like it but I'd like it even more if it still held all the heat of Greece...
You mean
Now I keep my gin in the freezer
next to a book of poetry
that holds all the heat of Greece
?
Maybe 'that still holds all the heat of Greece'...
That would do it for me. nice and terse and haikuesque.
Just that unexpected juxtaposition somehow with fridge and it still holding the heat -- got to make for some intrigue etc...
Yes I agree.
Doesn't always have to be morose eh?
Thanks.
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