Monday, December 1, 2008

Still

In the back of a cab
back of her neck responds--
his words glow so softly

2 comments:

Steve said...

how about in the back of a cab her neck glistens--his words glow so softly

I dunno, just a thought...

Deb said...

glowing words make necks glisten - hmmmm that is interesting. A bit sci-fi! haha!



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