Saturday, December 6, 2008

Frozen Gin

Now I keep my gin in the freezer
next to a book of poetry
that still holds all the heat of Greece

4 comments:

Steve said...

I like it but I'd like it even more if it still held all the heat of Greece...

Deb said...

You mean

Now I keep my gin in the freezer
next to a book of poetry
that holds all the heat of Greece

?

Steve said...

Maybe 'that still holds all the heat of Greece'...

That would do it for me. nice and terse and haikuesque.

Just that unexpected juxtaposition somehow with fridge and it still holding the heat -- got to make for some intrigue etc...

Deb said...

Yes I agree.

Doesn't always have to be morose eh?

Thanks.